i was nike, & you were vans
we connected right away because i loved boarding & you loved sports
we stomped to the rhythm of cheers & we finished off the alma mater & we ran on to the field when the team won
(even though it was no surprise)
we kept running into each other
& pretty soon we started spending lots of time together near doorways
we started walking places
we walked on the mountains
we walked on the city
we walked everywhere
we tried sneaking into the bowling alley but they caught us & had us kicked out
we started dancing
& you made fun of me because i didn't know how
i liked the color of your eyelets
& the way you did your laces
& i didn't know how to tell you
but you could tell anyway so that was okay
we were a perfect fit
(although i was size 11 & you were size 6)
i wanted to tie the knot
& at first you were afraid of tripping
but i reminded you of all the walking we had done
& it was okay
& you were okay
& we were okay
because we were together
& it felt perfect
because we knew we were solemates
ok. i freaking love this so much. "(although i was size 11 & you were size 6)" and this line is brilliant.
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ReplyDeletegood lines:)
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ReplyDeleteI liked the preposition ON. You used it instead of OVER or THROUGH or AROUND and it was so good. Sorry to bring grammar into this.
i liked the color of your eyelets
ReplyDeleteidk if this was supposed to sound like eyes but thats what came to mind and i instantly loved it.
this is such a freaking cool idea. wow.
ReplyDeletethe thing about eyelets was my favorite. super clever writing, plus super cute story.
Brillllllllllllllllllllllliant.
ReplyDeletewhy am i just seeing this?
ReplyDeleteamazing.
SO GOOD! Those puns tho
ReplyDeleteI have been waiting for someone to write this.
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